Post by njrk97 on Oct 13, 2018 12:40:17 GMT
you probably should cut out the template in the history, that is sorta their to be replaced, also probably just fix it so its not all bolded.
Rather interesting situations regarding the weapons, was that a image you found of your own accord or do you see it in another application? just because its the same weapon as steven-universe-rp.proboards.com/thread/2603/aquarius has. Easy way to fix this is maybe for you to swap out and try and find another image of a sword, unless you super attached to it for whatever reason.
Now regards to greater details, Your first power is....well its probably not allowed in its current form as it falls under the realms of god modding (Taking control away or somewhat dictating what another character does). Since a person RPing doesn't get a choice, you say that you use your power to make them angry, then what can they really do, how is it fun or interactive for them, they are basically being told how their character must feel. NOW it CAN work if your really attached to the idea of it, but we may have to workshop it a bit more then.
With abilities or powers its always important to ask yourself "Is this power fun to fight or interact against?"
With the second power, does she effect anything in the dreams or is it purely observational. Does she vanish and physically enter the dream, or it it like a meditative thing were her body will remain in the real world. Details are important, people have to be able to visualise and understand your power to be able to RP against it.
Rather interesting situations regarding the weapons, was that a image you found of your own accord or do you see it in another application? just because its the same weapon as steven-universe-rp.proboards.com/thread/2603/aquarius has. Easy way to fix this is maybe for you to swap out and try and find another image of a sword, unless you super attached to it for whatever reason.
Now regards to greater details, Your first power is....well its probably not allowed in its current form as it falls under the realms of god modding (Taking control away or somewhat dictating what another character does). Since a person RPing doesn't get a choice, you say that you use your power to make them angry, then what can they really do, how is it fun or interactive for them, they are basically being told how their character must feel. NOW it CAN work if your really attached to the idea of it, but we may have to workshop it a bit more then.
With abilities or powers its always important to ask yourself "Is this power fun to fight or interact against?"
With the second power, does she effect anything in the dreams or is it purely observational. Does she vanish and physically enter the dream, or it it like a meditative thing were her body will remain in the real world. Details are important, people have to be able to visualise and understand your power to be able to RP against it.