Pink Kunzite(Alt. Of Blue Quartz)

[★Pink Kunzite★]

Name:  Pink Kunzite aka Kunzite or Pink

Appeared Gender: Appear as Female

Appeared Age: Appears to be 20

Gemstone: Pink Kunzite

Gemstone Location: White Sapphire(In right Hand) Carnelian(In left Hand)

Faction: Crystal Gems

Corrupted:(Y/N)No

(If Corrupted)Monster Form: None

Appearance:

Carnelian is on the left and White Sapphire is on the right



Pink Kunzite

Personality: Carnelian: She is quite of a hot head basically, as your average Quartz she uses her spare time doing reckless stunts in which could possibly get her cracked. Carnelian is rather reckless at times having a couple mere childlike characteristics internally, having more of a bright welcoming smile she is also a gentle gem who enjoys life and its well being. Carnelian works hard to become greater than she is despite being a defective gem, she was made on the beta kindergarten on earth where she was in too long(similar towards Amethyst reason for being short). Even though she thinks she is fine the way she is, she believes deep inside that she is supposed to be taller and really want to be of average quartz size. She has more of bad manners when it comes to guest, shouting towards them with enthusiasm and she is quite the burst of joy, she sees many things differently than others always trying to look towards the good side of things when things get rough in which that leadership instinct comes out of her and she takes charge no matter what the situation may bring. Carnelian is quite the chatter box when meeting people as she adores finding humans, and gems whom are nice along with that she can just talk to really, she has an appeal for what humans call sky diving as well, feeling the wind flow through her hair and face in which it makes her feel as though anything Is possibly. She's optimistic of a lot of things in which her freedom was one of them and it came true once she meet White Sapphire.

White Sapphire As a Sapphire as she is no exception, White Sapphire is entirely calm no doubt, she is patient with a lot of gems along with people due to her being a sapphire. Being of Aristocratic status on homeworld she kept those ways throughout her entire life on earth, she really enjoys life and it's fond vegetation along with it's majestic lifeforms, Sapphire sees anything as valuable no matter how poor or how insignificant others may think it is she believes all life is precious. Invigorated By Rose Quartz she became a crystal gem and stayed on earth where she found a defective quartz, when it comes to meeting people she is a bit timid at first however once she gets to know you its like she is an open book. Sapphire misses homeworld and being able to speak with other well mannered people as her however she grew abundant towards the life of the crystal gems. Sapphire doesn't like it when there is a mess though, she isn't a neat freak however she wants things organized in which it could be easier to process and find things, her life was built on structure so that side of her would not be going any where. Sapphire likes to live to the fullest so if she ever got to try knew things she would surely would be the type of gem to take that chance and just go with the flow thanks to carnelian.

Pink Kunzite: This gem fusion is really indeed a peaceful gem, however she does show a bit of carnelian some times swiftly hoping through areas with ease as if she were a monkey, sapphire's calm like state balances carnelians reckless manner in which there fusion is unbreakable mentally that is. They are bounded together by love, years of getting to know one another they decided to never split apart and fused to make her, it was like there marriage if you will, Kunzite is rather distant when it comes to being social however she would preform a dialog if needed to this is only for those she barely knows, if she gets to now you she is quite the talkative gem fusion. She can be a bit over confident in herself at times when it comes to battling however if she sees a fight she cannot win she would simply flee from the area(I'm mean hey, logic man). Kunzite as a crystal gem however in the face of danger she shall not given in, she would fight for what's right, fight for her long freedom, fight to exist as Pink Kunzite!.

Likes/Dislikes:

+Likes+

-Vegetation
-Animals
-to Talk to herself(Carnelian + Sapphire talk)
-Exploring vast Lands
-Staying as a Fusion

+Dislikes+
-The Diamonds
-Being Unorganized
-Not Being able to protect the people she cares about
-Homeworld but not some of the gems there

Fears: Being seen as a Perm-Fusion and Shattered, Being poofed, Being Separated from one another

Weapon:

Pink Kunzite weapon are Pink Bladed Fans, sharped on each blade there are a total of five blades in each of her fans with stars signs in the gaps of the flaps, as a fusion they mix carnelian's kitana swords and Sapphires regular fan to make this weapon. In which then its enable to push air using the fans in myriads of ways, causing even a minor tornado even if pushed to a far extent. The blades are able to slice through the physical form of a gem however not shatter it as it was created to not do so. (The color isn't blue imagine that its pink in the image)


Ability 1: Electricity Generating As Carnelian having the ability of Fire while Sapphire with Ice, there abilities make there fusion capable of for electricity, from there palms on there gems also there able to form electricity from the sky, forming dark clouds in which charges this its takes 2 post to finish the charge. Depending on the amount formed from the sky they could shoot a barrage attack of electric bolts or even a ray of electrical waves at there opponent, This also means that they are immune to electricity once in there fusion however some forms of electricity are capable of poofing there form and resulting them to separate such as if on is sent to a core reactor as electricity surges through them, to an extent there body cant take it and they'll poof.


Ability 2: Illusions Pink Kunzite is able to preform illusions to confuse there opponent,
you create a illusion within a 15 radius, and any gem within it is effected. It acts almost like a 'skin' over the real environment. The illusions can not create solid constructs though, meaning that anything that is solid in the illusion must correlate to a similar shaped solid object at the same location in reality. Anything created in the illusion without a reality counterpart will be intangible and can be stepped through, generally giving away the fact that your opponents are within an illusion. The illusion doesn't break when they figure it out but at that point they know what they are seeing is fake and start acting accordingly, either preparing for a attack or starting to move in a direction to try and exit the illusions area. Illusion lasts for 3 of my posts and has a cool down of 2 of my posts.





Fusions: (She's a perma fusion) None

History: It would be years that passed since series of quartz was burst out the walls in the beta Kindergarten, Carnelian would then suddenly pop out her hole quite scared and confused at the time. As she would be puzzled by the sandy scenery she simply would start to shake her head moving onward, wind blew the sand throughout the area in which some clashed on to the orange walls of the Kindergarten. She was alone, no one was there for her at the time, she felt nothing but sorrow in her opposable heart. Carnelian would journey out towards a near by warp-pad in which then as she got on it, a glistening tunnel of light teleported her onto to rock carved to appear as a hand. Carnelian looked up to see a giant being of a statue which startled her, suddenly series of beings came on the door's hands of this statue and turned towards her. She was lost and small, she didn't know what to do as these were gems with a star sign on them each. Suddenly a gem caught her eye, it would be a sapphire no doubt due to the clothing along with the physical features. The Sapphire would tell carnelian to get down and come greet herself in which then she had done just that, holding up the diamond saluted she spoken of her name and her code which made the others laugh. They all would then shout welcome to earth we are the crystal gems, in which then here on out Carnelian knew this would be her new home, the sapphire seemed to be interested in carnelian but didn't say it as she was too shy actually not saying anything towards her other than what she said previously.

As Carnelian would head towards the Sapphire from that moment on there bound grew, it took a few years but every year they would talk and talk even more, it seemed that it was there thing to do together, walking on the sandy shores on the beaches and having countless conversations with one another. Eventually they were ready to do it, fusion, as they first practiced it they immediately separated as there fusion wasn't balanced yet, the second time was more easier as there dances synced, then it happened the eerie red and white glow formed into a pink bulge of light in which Kunzite was born. They both knew from now on they would stay like this as one, talking together still they did, even as a fusion.


Character Arcs:

+Kunzite gets herself affiliated with more crystal gems+

+Teaches others about fusion+

+Invigorate Homeworld gems to make the perfect switch+

+Fuse with one other gem as her perm fusion+

[njrk97]

Are those your drawings?

50 yards may be kinda huge for a illusion area. Also you wording is a little weird in parts 'the victim would come to reality'.What does that mean? Is it like if they realise its a illusion it breaks down, how does stuff from the outside world interact with the illusion,would she have to form the illusion around geometry IE:if there is a rock or tree in the environment she cant just make it vanish with a illusion,she would have to incorporate them in it. Or would it be like she can cloak stuff like that, but then if a gem hits it they realise that something is their and then the illusion breaks down.

Does it work on multiple gems or people?

[★Pink Kunzite★]

Sure did.

I could narrow it down to 15 if that's more suitable. When I say the victim comes to reality it means any who fall for the illusion, in which they are the victims, if they simply snap out of it then they will come back to reality as her illusions is an alternated reality created by herself. So in the radius things start to slow down and shift spiraling around as if one is dizzy, this affects gems and humans, I wouldn't say they vanish as the original things are still there but only she has changed the area in her image through the radius EX; say I'm in the forest and using the skill and change a forest area to appear as lava like, if a gem touches something sold in which is just air in there view due to the illusion then the trees are still there just changed to the naked eye, just as you said as when they realize it the illusions breaks down, yes.

It works on multiple gems, any whom enter the radius really , actually the more the worse as depending on what the illusion is it would be quicker to break away as there more to realize that its all just a fake.

[njrk97]

Careful on your sentence and wording stuff again.Same stuff that applied in your old application applies her,don't go too crazy with synonyms as it just makes things awkward to read. Plus be careful of sentence structure,realise when you need to take a breath and start a new sentence,or add a comma to help emphasise or break apart two subjects.

So wait,is your power making a hologram over the environment? (Ie they walk through a tunnel and come into your illusion of Homeworld,most gems would question this and realise something is up.) Or do you mentally force gems not the question a illusion (Ie they walk through a cave and enter Homeworld,not even thinking this is strange until they walk through a solid object or something).


I feel as if this is probably needlessly complicated for what you want it to do. From what i can gather its this
1.You create a illusion in a set area
2.Any gems within said area sees the illusion
3.They cant escape the illusion until they realise what they are viewing is fake
4.The power has some effect that makes them not question the illusion initially (IE:It never occurs to them why they went from a snow capped forest to a volcano when fighting this strange pink gem.)

Is that correct?

[Blue Quartz]

I have a tendency to do those things often xD ill work on that

you correct on how its used overall based off your numberings

Kind've on the hologram part as they appear real but aren't, holograms could be physical forms like pearls.

So she tricks them usually using something they love to make them feel as though its really so she mentally messes with them so the illusion can last so yea the 2nd on you said would fall under that.

[njrk97]

hmm, see im wasn't sure about the whole thing of not making them question the illusion,just because he may be a minor form of godmodding since your basically telling them they cant think a certain way.Plus it means you can just create illusions without much thought out how to incorporate them in cleverly to stop a gem from realising what they are viewing is fake.

I just feel like its a very complicated wording and effects for the power itself for what amounts to a portable and less tangible Rose's room (Ie: does it need the thing about the illusion breaking down when they realise its fake)

Why not just say that you create a illusion within a X radius, and any gem within it is effected.It acts almost like a 'skin' over the real environment. The illusions can not create solid constructs though, meaning that anything that is solid in the illusion must correlate to a similar shaped solid object at the same location in reality.Anything created in the illusion without a reality counterpart will be intangible and can be stepped through, generally giving away the fact that your opponents are within an illusion.The illusion doesn't break when they figure it out but at that point they know what they are seeing is fake and start acting accordingly, either preparing for a attack or starting to move in a direction to try and exit the illusions area. Illusion lasts for X amount of posts and has a cooldown of X amount of posts.

[Blue Quartz]

You explained it better than Id ever would Nj, Illusion skills are complex to explain but yes ill use that for it. It can last up to 4 post and will have a 2 post cool down,

[njrk97]

4 may be longish, remember that 4 posts you make in the thread,not 4 general posts in the thread. so maybe jump it down to 3.

Also lose the 'amount'. Since when i made that example its meant to be that 'X Amount' turns into the Number,not just the X Part.


Regarding your history, remember that the Crystal Gems rebellion only properly started about 2 years ago.

[Blue Quartz]

Alright.


Carnelian popped up during the rebellion, so like in the middle of the 1st year of it she surfaced from the ground and met Sapphire a few days after once she came to the temple. Sapphire joined in the beginning of the 1st year heading to earth she crash landed and headed towards the temple, shy to join but eventually she managed.

[njrk97]

I suppose at this point ill run this as accepted. The wording stuff will just come with practise.